My sorry attempt at cross stitch

A friend of mine asked me if I could do a cross stitch of an Emily the Strange picture for his girlfriend. And of course, my usual response is "Sure! - It shouldn't be too hard to do." I really need to stop saying that....

Anyway, here is the picture I was given to cross stitch:

And here is my cross stitch attempt: (Sorry it's a little blurry...)

I think I need a little more practice.... U_U